Stu Mason
Stu Mason

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PR #199 opened: docs: EAL accessibility sweep across the site

Tech-writer review flagged sentence complexity, idiom density, and em-dash overuse as a barrier for readers of English as an additional language. This PR is the fourth and final in the post-review cleanup series (after factual fixes / security.md / troubleshooting.md).

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mcp-primer.mdSplit the 86-word opening paragraph into a short sentence + bulleted primitive list. Added a "New to MCP?" callout pointing at the official quickstart. Made the "client primitives unused" claim explicit.
index.mdReplaced 6 idioms ("drop into", "one env var, you're running", "drop-in", "one-click slash commands", "walks through", etc.). Removed the unverifiable "responds within a day or two" claim.
guide/quickstart.mdReplaced em-dash mid-clause with a colon.
concepts/coolify-api-gotchas.mdRemoved "unhappy surprises" and three mid-sentence em-dashes. Tightened the controller-vs-spec note.
contributing/adding-tools.mdSoftened the "The order matters. Follow it." opener. Replaced four em-dashes with colons or full stops.
contributing/pr-flow.mdReplaced "ping the maintainer" with "post a comment". Removed unverifiable response-time claim.
contributing/testing.mdSplit a 35-word sentence. Replaced "before declaring done".
roadmap/v3-vision.mdRewrote the 47-word opening one-liner as three shorter sentences. Replaced "doesn't waste the user's hour" and several em-dashes.

What this doesn't change

  • No content removed (no information loss)
  • No new dead links
  • Tone stays personable; insider-jargon stripped only where it would block comprehension
  • Em-dashes kept where they aid readability — the goal is to reduce density, not eliminate them

Site builds clean. After this lands, all four post-review priorities from the tech-writer audit are addressed.

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